The Freezing Twister in Old England

Valerie P., 12, HKUGA College


     Lynn Benicia was a 14-year-old who lived in England in 1677. She often went to hunt with her father during Sundays and, occasionally, Wednesdays. She was the best swimmer and fisher in her village and a skilled archer as well. When there was trouble, Lynn was a person the whole village could rely on. When her father passed away, he left her a laurel wreath he made in the woods, causing Lynn to burst into tears. One day in winter, Lynn was hunting with her usual kit when an unusual sound came creeping towards her. She recognized the sound. It was the same sound that destroyed her village 10 years ago. It was a tornado, larger than she had ever seen.
     Lynn ran for her life, scooping up random little animals on the way, shouting for the villagers to go down to the cellar. The sound was terrifying, haunting Lynn about what happened 10 years ago. Trees whistled sharply in the air as if the god of wind was orchestrating a death march upon the village, striking terror and recalling the frightful memory that is believed to be buried underground. Lynn took the animals to her mother, and then scooted the weeping children into a cellar nearby as the tornado confronted her.
     The tornado broke trees, sucked houses in and, of course, created gales of wind towards Lynn making her lose balance. The tornado was at least a meter wide, and as high as the visible sky. The tornado was gunmetal grey with a hint of snow within. Wisps of water vapor swirled around it as if a river was sucked in (Lynn wondered if the river near the village was really sucked in).
     She shuddered, as she realized that a few animals in the forest were escaping from the tornado’s wrath. She then took a deep breath, and charged towards the tornado after blinking back a silvery tear.
     The animals were pushed towards the village in her friend’s arms while he was staring at her, unable to do anything at all. She touched three fingers to her lips then stretched them towards these survivors as She was hurled in thin air.
     She closed my eyes as she felt the cold air swirling around her. Those sharp blows of wind felt like shrieks of laughter… No, they didn’t sound like laughter, they sounded like prayers. And the loudest one of all was her father’s voice. She heard him pray about her mother, about Laura, about the village elder, Woodring, about the healer, about the fishermen, about the farmers… about her.
Lynn closed her eyes. Her father saved her precious life.

No More Shark's Fin Soup

Jessica L., 10, F.I.S.

Shark’s fin soup is a dish that goes back many years in China. Lots of people eat it because it is an old tradition, but it harms the shark species and affects the species which are linked to sharks. People cut off shark fins and throw the animals back into the sea to die. This practice is killing millions of sharks because the dish is very popular in China. The Hong Kong government should ban shark’s fin soup because all animals should be treated equally, sharks are already endangered, and tradition should not be a priority.

Humans are actually animals, evolved from apes. We are animals, except that we have developed more than sharks. Why do we have to push the other species around us to the brink of extinction? People might say, “But we are the best species and we have the right to stomp sharks out.” Just because we are the best does not mean that we have the right to stomp others out. As executive Chinese chef Ip Kwok-fai says, “It is not hard to create alternatives to shark’s fin soup.” Alternatives might just be made out of something simple and good.

If sharks are endangered, why do we still harm them? We are being selfish and cruel to this species by killing them for food when there are thousands of equally good-tasting alternatives. Some people might wonder, “Well, lots of species are endangered. Why should I be caring particularly for sharks?” The truth is that we need to care for all of these endangered species. We cannot just care for one. “Shark’s fin-free supporters are a minority in Hong Kong,” says Toby Kwan, marketing manager of the LH group. However, we can change that if we stop eating shark’s fin soup.

Tradition is important, and that is true. But is it as important as having a species disappear before one’s eyes? Young couples these days only order shark’s fin soup to not be embarrassed in front of their parents. “I need to impress my parents,” people might say. But wouldn’t their parents be more proud if they supported part of a movement to save a species? “Actually, they ended up being very supportive,” says corporate banker Arthur Chan Yat-long, who asked his parents about not having shark’s fin soup at his wedding.

Lots of species are endangered, partly because of us humans. We have killed other species that are endangered for fun. If we lose these species, the world will not be the same. There will be no sharks patrolling the sea, no giant pandas at safaris. It should be our job, as the greatest species, to tend to these smaller species. We have our own part to play.

"Impossible" Children

After a discussion about recent research regarding psychopathy in children, we asked our students to tell us if there is such a thing as an “impossible” child.

Jeewon S., 13, HKIS

There is a wide boundary when it comes to labeling a child as “impossible.” Children all throw tantrums and make impulsive decisions at least once. There are, however, exceptions. To the most extreme point, an “impossible” child would be one who showcases no emotion to another’s pain or one who can’t control his or her temper.

        The classic problematic child horror movies are turning into reality. New research hasshow that children, especially those who have callous-emotional disorder, are more susceptible to becoming “psychopaths” if they already aren’t. Callous-emotional disorder results in people whose amygdalae (a part of the brain) don’t respond to other people’s emotions like misery, fear or happiness. Thus, the children commit violent actions and don’t care about the consequences or outcome.

        In the world, very few children can be categorized as “impossible”. A lot of parents don’t realize that they were once, too, headstrong children. They expect children to comprehend their high expectations and get mad if they fail to do so. More parents need to realize that there is no such thing as an angelic, perfect, cherub-like child, and lower their standards to have a better bond with their children.

        To understand a child, to truly form a genuine connection, parents need to observe and understand. And in the rarest cases of child psychopathy, parents should have as much patience and guidance and help them learn the consequences of their impulsive actions. But who knows: there is still hope and possibility for troublesome children to mature into well-behaved adults.

Secret Messages and Sorceresses

You are a military general living in the year 1850, back before the days of computers, email, instant messaging, TV, iPods, iPads, etc.

It is wartime, and you need to deliver an important message concerning a battle! How do you deliver the message?

Tiffany L., 7, CIS

        I use a special wooden pair of shoes, go on a horse and gallop to the sea. Then I use a clicking sound to get a trained dolphin from the sea and then I ride it to the other side. My horse gallops back to its stable. I get up on the other side, mount another horse and gallop on, carrying the letter all the way. I soon get to a forest and I take out my compass. I need to head east to get to the place I was supposed to deliver the letter to. I go as fast as I can, since the water is starting soon. We can’t afford to lose a heartbeat. I soon get out of the forest and then find a river. I back up my horse a pace or two and I make it leap across the river. This is what the letter said:

“Dear Eastern Army,

Please help us defeat the army of bandits. They outnumber us. If you help us, we will give you a reward.”

I return home safely with a lot of warriors and defeat the bandits.

Jasmine Y., 9, CDNIS

I live in a peaceful little cottage in the woods, far away from where the war is going to start. But while the war is going on I need to send a message to my pen pal. One day in the middle of the war I quickly think of a way to send a message to my pen pal. I write down the message I need to send:

Dear Liu Kai Lin,

I have something important to tell you. There is war and it is coming close to Beijing. Use the special lucky charm I gave you to keep you and your family safe. Bring everything you need and you may come to Hong Kong.

From, Yu Jia Min

After I write the message I quickly get the guest room ready. Then I fly back to Beijing on an airplane and take a secret passage to my pen pal’s home. Then I give her the message and after she reads it she and her family show me a shortcut through the war to Hong Kong without anyone getting hurt.

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You are a good witch who must travel to the ends of the earth to rescue a friend who has been kidnapped by an evil sorceress!

Lauren M., 9, GSIS

The sorceress’s name is Wooloomooloo. She has pimples all over her face, black eyes, black fingernails, a black cloak and snakes in her hair. One time, she made people listen to her by casting a spell on everyone except me because she knew I would do this so I turned myself invisible.

        I went to the sorceress’s castle and saw my friend trapped there. Then, I saw the sorceress coming ready to do something bad to her. Just before she did something I got my invisibility cloak and told it to hold Wooloomooloo on the floor while I got my friend. After that I shared the cloak with my friend and flew off. She went with me to my home and ate the food that was from the magic gem to celebrate.

Hillary Y., 7, IMS

This all happened on a stormy summer night. The sky was dark and the birds stopped singing because a good witch was kidnapped. So, I was sent out to find her.

The prophecy says that the good witch is kept far to the east guarded by lots of monsters and fire. I searched for days to find the cave so I looked and looked for a long time until I heard a voice in the distance.

“Help. Help. Come to rescue me before I get fed to birds!”

The sorceress’s name was Erin. Her hair was blue. Her skin was red and she was awarded with “the most evil witch of the century.”

I ran to save my friend but first I cast a spell to make myself invisible and crept inside to save my friend. However, the sorceress was there so I crept behind her and I crept away with my friend.

Talking Germs

We asked our students to pretend they were germs and report back to us about what kinds of things happen in the germ world. Here are the conversations they told us they had:

Wing Lam N., 9, HKGUA Primary School

 

Me: Where do you think we should hide?

Chewy: Let’s go into people’s bodies and make them sick.

Spiky: But how?

Flying Bullet: Fly into their mouths.

Me: No, let’s hide in that food. Then, people will eat the food and we will be inside their bodies.

All Germs: Good idea!

Jasmine Y., 9, CDNIS 

I said, “Hi, why don’t we go down to the germ playground in Germ Land?” My friend said, “Sure! I’m happy to go there.” So we headed down to germ playground and we went on the swings. I said, “Isn’t this a sunny day? I think it will be a good time swinging.” My friend agrees. Germs talk basically about good and bright things.

Jiawen W., 8, Chek Kiang

Me: Should we play games?

Germ: Yes!

Me: What shall we play?

Germ: Let’s play hide-and-seek!

Me: Ooh la la!

Nok Yan C., 9, DGS

Me: What is your name?

Germs: I am Sports Germ, and he is Talent Germ, and she is Sleepy Germ. We’re good for human beings.

Me: I want to be a good germ too!

Germs: We can’t help you.

Happy Halloween!

Lyris K., 7, Victoria Shanghai Academy

1) There is a Halloween party at your school! What does your classroom look like? What decorations do you and your classmates put up?

We’ve got witches, pumpkins, black cats, dark lights, and skeleton heads hanging on the lockers.

2) Your teachers cooked up some tasty Halloween snacks and gave the foods some interesting names. What is each one made of? What does it taste like?

Blood punch: Blood punch is cranberry  juice.

Bag of Bones: A bag of bones is a bag of candy.

Graveyard Surprise: Graveyard surprise is some of my cookies yesterday.

3) Everyone is having a good time, but there is no more blood punch left! So your teacher asks you to go to the kitchen and get some more. As you are walking to the kitchen, you hear a crash and a scream coming from behind a door. What do you think has just happened?

I think it started like this. Some naughty students were sitting in there and another student came in. Then the door slammed and the naughty student screamed.

4) You go into this room and are surprised to see a ghost! This ghost looks a little strange though. How is it different from what you expected a ghost to look like?

He was wearing underwear! Its eyes are red as blood and its tail smelled like blue cheese.

5) The ghost starts to cry. It tells you that it is very sad. What happened to it? How did it become a ghost? Why is it so sad?

It is because everyone laughed at him. There was a magic spell in front of the people. The man drank it so he became a ghost.

6) It says that you can help make it feel better. What do you do so that it is not as sad?

The people will get some blood punch for the ghost! Because it is sweet for him.

7) Since you helped the ghost, it flies away and joins its family. How does the ghost thank you? What does it say to you? Does it give you a special gift?

He said, “Thank you,” and he gave me a gift. Inside the gift is a bow for my hair!

8) Finally you make it back to your class with a bowl of blood punch! Your teacher and classmates ask where you have been. What do you tell them?

Instead, I just say, “Just messing around”. Then the teacher said, “Next time bring the blood punch faster”. Then we continue the Halloween party!

Stop Whining!!

Wang Lok S., 14, South Island School

        Do you like people who whine? People don’t like other people whining but they do it themselves. People who whine are like people who beat around the bush the whole time. Yes, it helps you to not be bottled up and become stressed, but it makes other people judge you from these actions.

        People don’t like whiners. We have trained our body to just shut off and ignore whiners. Unfortunately, there is a point where we cannot take it anymore and blow up. Then the whiners get offended and then whine about you instead! Sure, it makes you feel good but it doesn’t make us feel any better. There are other ways to calm yourself like writing a journal. Kids might like a toy that they talk and complain to. Try not to complain or whine to someone else as they may not appreciate it and it may even result in conflicts.

You may get judged for who you are. People who usually talk loudly and complain a lot are considered low class and no one wants to be around them because they don’t want to listen to their complaints. Yes, people feel good when they complain but others feel like you are a person who is low class. There is no point in complaining 24/7 when it ruins your reputation and relationships with your friends.

Whining gets you nowhere. It doesn’t help with getting to know people, and most of the time you can solve it yourself. Most of the time, complaining about how slow traffic is won’t make it go faster. Whining about how stupid your grade was doesn’t make you smarter. The only thing that matters is how you deal with these problems. You will feel better when you deal with the problem yourself.

If we never complained, we would have never invented many life-changing inventions or even be where we are today. If no one complained that “My legs are killing me to get to grandma’s place” then we would not have invented transport. If we never complained about how bored we are, we would have never come up with entertainment. However, these were all made by self-motivated people who tried to solve the problem themselves. These people are considered “Wonderful” people because they not only noticed the needs of people, but they made the dream come true.

In conclusion, whining will get you nowhere; just complaining or whining about how annoying things are is not going to solve anything. Saying good things instead helps people and you also gain a good reputation!

What Makes a Good Teacher?

Jonathan C., 15, South Island

     Teachers are a child’s guiding path. They teach them the basic skills required in life and try to set a good example. These are the basic requirements. But to be a good teacher, you have to excite the students and make them hungry to learn. If you stir a child’s interest they will learn better. There are many traits of a good teacher.

     A teacher must be authoritative, fun, focused and enthusiastic. This is because you need to control your classroom in order for your students to even be interested in the lesson. Second of all, if your lesson is fun then you fully capture a child’s interest. By being focused, your students will follow suit. Some students don’t have interest in certain things but if you show passion and enthusiasm, they can learn to enjoy learning.

     As a teacher, you should not just aim to teach a student in class time. Build a friendship and spend extra time answering their questions. Get to know the child better. Show an interest. If you guide them well they will be grateful later on. Also, by having a good relationship, their overall attitude will improve in class.

    In general, being a good teacher isn’t just being knowledgeable. It’s also about being fun, enthusiastic and understanding.

Introductory Creative Writing Selections

Describe what it’s like to be inside a tornado

Jerald C., 9 ,ISF

It felt like an earthquake was happening. We heard wind sounds. I saw cars falling down from the sky. I thought that I was trapped in jail. I also thought that I was surrounded by ghosts.

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Pretend you are a painting in a new art gallery:

Kyle W. 9 ,GSIS

Day 1: I talk to a picture of a banana called Fred. At 12:00 in the afternoon I see loads of people. 200,000 people come to look at me. Soon I am moved to a large table where the best paintings are. Then I see a tall man with a moustache and a bag that says “VIP”. He looks at me and puts a golden badge on me. The badge says, “Best Painting in the World!”

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Create a town and describe a very strange building that is there:

Dorothy L., 8, AIS

The building is fun. It has juice in the pool and an ice rink filled with ice cream. If you turn the light on, sweets and fruits come out, so if I am hungry I can go in the building.

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 Pretend you are a taxi driver. How do you feel when you go to work?

Nok Yan C., 9, DGKS

Oh! 6:00 a.m., it’s time to go to work. I don’t brush my teeth, and I don’t change pajamas. I will be late. I jump into my taxi and drive it to Po Lam

When one of your passengers leaves the taxi, he does something unexpected. What does he do?

I notice that the man steals an old woman’s purse and her cheap telephone. I want to use my eyes to talk to her, but she’s blind.

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You work on a movie set and discover that all the film is missing! What do you do?

Andrew H., 8, HKIS

I start asking what happened. An assistant says, “Someone was in there and his name was Daniel Crook.” I asked him to take me to him. I found him. He was a robber! I got a metal badge for catching the crook. The police said, “That he was a professional crook on the loose. His wife was too. She was a fake actress. The real one is safe! Thanks to you we don’t’ have to catch them.”

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You are a mermaid who learns that humans do not think you exist. Why do this think this?

Jiawen W. 8, St. Stephen’s Primary

People don’t think we are real because Hans Christian Andersen wrote the story The Little Mermaid and it is just a story, it is not real.

What Do You Think of When You Hear the Word "Beach?"

        Mia T., 7, PLK CKY School

        This word makes me feel like I am going to Thailand’s beach. I feel like I’m picking sea shells. I also feel like I’m swimming in a swimming pool with my father, mother, sister and my helper.

        Michelle L., 7, SSGP 

       I am swimming and I saw some fish, some water snake, prawn, crab and star fish. I catch some of the star fish, crab, prawn, and fish but not the water snake because it is poisonous. It is true that day is very fun but sadly I saw a scary dog barking at me and I jumped on my mom and my mom said to me, “You do not need to be scared. The dog only wants to play with you!”

        Bernice K., 7, St. Paul's Convent School

        Today mum said we could go to the beach and play. We are happy. We plan to go to Big Wave Bay. Once we reach the beach, I made a sandcastle. I decorate it with seashells. There is a moat around it. After I build it, I went to take my seahorse float and went to swim. The ocean is too cold so I get out soon. Mum has prepared some sandwiches. After I have eaten it I went for a stroll on the beach. I found sixteen seashells, one baby crab and a starfish. Then dad plays with a Frisbee. I play with a beach ball. Then we play on the surfboard. Finally it is time to take a shower. Then we went to barbecue. When we got home it was already twelve o’clock. I am very happy today.